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THE DIAGRAM BELWO SHOW HOW ORANGE JUICE IS PRODUCED.

THE DIAGRAM BELWO SHOW HOW ORANGE JUICE IS PRODUCED. ORQOG

THE PROVIDED PROCESS CHART ILLUSTRATES VARIOUS STEPS INVOLVE DIN THE PRODUCTION OF ORANGE JUICE. OVERALL, THERE ARE THREE MAIN STAGES, COLLECTION, EVAPORATION AND PACKAGING. IT BEGINS FROM DELIVERY OF ORANGES TO END PRODUCT IN SUPERMARKET. IT CAN BE CLEARLY SEEN THAT, THE ORANGES IS DELIVERED BY TRUCKS TO FACTORY WHERE, IT WASHED IN CLEAN WATER TO CLEAN IT THEN, IT IS MOVES TO EXTRACTION MACHINES WHERE, SOLID WASTE IS SEPRATED FOR ANIMAL FEEDS. AT THIS STAGE, THE FRESH JUICE IS READY TO BE PACKED IN TETRA PACKS AND TRANSPORTED TO SUPERMARKETS. THE PROCESS CHART FURTHER COLLATE THAT, IN EVAPORATION STAGE, THE FRESH CONCENTRATION SEPRATED FROM SOLID WASTE IN TRANSPORTED IN REFRIGERATED TRUCKS TO EVAPORATION FACILITIES WHERE, THE WATER IS REMOVED AND FORMS IN CONCENTARTED JUICES WHICH, IS READY FOR PACKAGING. IN PACKING STEP, THE CONCENTRATION IS PACKED UNDER METAL CANS AND IT LIFTED BY LIFTING CARS TO FACTORIED WHERE, HYDROGEN IS ADDED AND DELIVERED TO SUPERMARKETS.

THE PROVIDED PROCESS CHART ILLUSTRATES VARIOUS STEPS INVOLVE DIN THE PRODUCTION OF ORANGE JUICE.

OVERALL
, THERE ARE THREE MAIN STAGES, COLLECTION, EVAPORATION AND PACKAGING. IT This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :initiatescommences
BEGINS
 FROM DELIVERY OF ORANGES TO This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :expiration
END
 PRODUCT IN SUPERMARKET.

IT CAN BE CLEARLY
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :witnessed
SEEN
 THAT, THE ORANGES IS DELIVERED
 BY TRUCKS TO FACTORY WHERE, IT WASHED IN CLEAN WATER TO CLEAN IT THEN, IT IS This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :relocates
MOVES
 TO EXTRACTION MACHINES WHERE, SOLID WASTE IS Possible spelling mistake found.SeparatedSerratedSEPRA TED
SEPRATED
 FOR ANIMAL FEEDS. AT THIS STAGE, THE FRESH JUICE IS READY TO BE PACKED
 IN TETRA PACKS AND TRANSPORTED TO SUPERMARKETS.

THE PROCESS CHART FURTHER
 COLLATE THAT, IN EVAPORATION STAGE, THE FRESH CONCENTRATION Possible spelling mistake found.SeparatedSerratedSEPRA TED
SEPRATED
 FROM SOLID WASTE Adverb repetition. Please, verify.IN TRANSPORTEDTRANSPORTED IN
IN TRANSPORTED IN
 REFRIGERATED TRUCKS TO EVAPORATION FACILITIES WHERE, THE WATER IS REMOVED
 AND FORMS IN Possible spelling mistake found.Concentrated
CONCENTARTED
 JUICES WHICH, IS READY FOR PACKAGING. IN PACKING STEP, THE CONCENTRATION IS PACKED
 UNDER METAL CANS AND IT LIFTED BY LIFTING CARS TO Possible spelling mistake found.FactoriesFactoredFactorizedFACTOR IED
FACTORIED
 WHERE, HYDROGEN IS This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :accrued
ADDED
 AND DELIVERED TO SUPERMARKETS. 

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