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the chart below shows the percentage of each citrus fruit produced in Brazil, China and USA. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparison when relevant.

the chart below shows the percentage of each citrus fruit produced in Brazil, China and USA. 8LxDk
In overall, oranges were produced the most in Brazil and USA, while the agriculture of tangerines made up the most significant part in China. Fruiting of tangerine is takin up the most segments in China which is definitely catching eyes. Otherwise, in all the three countries, further citrus fruits which were not precisely mentioned were seem to be the least in production. It is clear that production of oranges represents the largest proportion in Brazil by 87%, whereas grapefruit and other citrus fruits are undoubtedly the smallest with only one percentage each. Fruit farming of tangerines and lemons are around 5% and 6% respectively. In USA, approximately three quarters of the fruit growth are oranges, while grapefruit is cultivated with 16% coming in second. The amount of other citrus fruit growth in USA is exactly the same with Brazil. Unlikely, tangerine production made up biggest part of the China chart by 74% while the rates of oranges production coming in next by 18%. The percentages of all lemons, grape fruit and other citrus fruits combined is no bigger than oranges segment in China.
In
overall
, oranges
were produced
the most in Brazil and USA, while the agriculture of tangerines made up the most significant part in China. Fruiting of tangerine is
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up the most segments in China which is definitely catching eyes.
Otherwise
, in all the three countries,
further
citrus
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fruits
which were not
precisely
mentioned were
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seem
to be the least in production.

It is
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clear
that production of oranges represents the largest proportion in Brazil by 87%, whereas grapefruit and other citrus
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fruits
are
undoubtedly
the smallest with
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only
one percentage each.
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Fruit
farming of tangerines and lemons are around 5% and 6%
respectively
.

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In USA
, approximately three quarters of the
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fruit
growth are oranges, while grapefruit
is cultivated
with 16% coming in second. The amount of other citrus
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fruit
growth
A determiner is probably missing here: "in the USA".
in USA
is exactly the same with Brazil.

Unlikely, tangerine production made up biggest part of the China chart by 74% while the rates of oranges production coming in
next
by 18%. The percentages of all lemons, grape
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fruit
and other citrus
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fruits
combined is no bigger than oranges segment in China.
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