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The chart below shows the value of one country's exports in various categories during 2015 and 2016. The table shows the percentage change in each category of exports in 2016 compared with 2015. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant

The bar graph report illustrates the number of a country exports in five different categories in 2015 and 2016, and the table represents the difference of percentage in every category of exports in 2016 compared with 2015 in dollar. Overall, in both 2015 and 2016, petroleum products led the country’s exports, whereas textiles took the last place in 2015. Another general perspective finds that in 2016 the percentage change of textiles is the highest while the change of petroleum products hold the lowest value compared with 2015. A specific analysis reveals that petroleum products led engineered goods in 2015 and 2016 by about 4 billion dollars in exports and both of the items percentage slightly increased with combined totals by about 11. 5% respectively. However, the percentage for gems and jewellery drops in 2016 from 2015 of around 5. 18%. In 2015 and 2016, gems and jewellery sold approximately 43 and 41 billion dollars, which exceeds agricultural products by 12 and textiles by 16 in 2015 and by 9 billion dollars in 2016 for both agricultural products and textiles. The percentage of exports for agricultural products slowly increase by 0. 81% from 2015 while even textiles exports the lowest in both 2015 and 2016 but the percentage difference from 2015 to 2016 record the highest value which is 15. 24%.
The bar graph report illustrates the number of a country
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in five
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categories in 2015 and 2016, and the table represents the difference of
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percentage
in every category of
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exports
in 2016 compared with 2015 in dollar.

Overall
, in both 2015 and 2016, petroleum
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products
led the country’s
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, whereas
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textiles
took the last place in 2015. Another general perspective finds that in 2016 the
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change
of
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textiles
is the highest while the
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of petroleum
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products
hold the lowest value compared with 2015.

A specific analysis reveals that petroleum
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products
led engineered
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goods
in 2015 and 2016 by about 4 billion dollars in
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and both of the
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items
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slightly
increased with combined totals by about 11. 5%
respectively
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, the
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for gems and
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jewellery
drops in 2016 from 2015 of around 5. 18%.

In 2015 and 2016, gems and
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jewellery
sold approximately 43 and 41 billion dollars, which exceeds agricultural
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by 12 and
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textiles
by 16 in 2015 and by 9 billion dollars in 2016 for both agricultural
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and
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. The
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of
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for agricultural
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slowly
increase by 0. 81% from 2015 while even
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textiles
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exports
the lowest in both 2015 and 2016
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the
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difference from 2015 to 2016 record the highest value which is 15. 24%.
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IELTS academic The chart below shows the value of one country's exports in various categories during 2015 and 2016. The table shows the percentage change in each category of exports in 2016 compared with 2015.

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