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Changing a city which is called Castellon between 2000 and now.

The maps illustrate changes in the Spanish city of Castellon between the year 2000 and today. Generally I can say that the city is become more developed than the past. First main change is there are lots of buildings have been built in the city. Such as Hall of residence, new shopping centre and others we can see on the map. The most interesting change is converting train station into police station it is most visible thing. And new train station has been built near university. It is really comfortable to students and others. . It is really good transforming. And other part of the city there were lots of trees and now trees have been cut down, new shopping centre has been built. We can see cinema and bars, clubs by the sea. But there weren’t any kind of places before. Another most interesting comfort is the road. The road has been pedestrianized for travelers.

The maps illustrate This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :altersadjusts
changes
 in the Spanish city of Possible spelling mistake found.Castellón
Castellon
 between the year 2000 and This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :this day and agenowadays
today
.

Generally
 I can say that the city is become
 more developed than the past. First
 main This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :alteradjust
change
 is there are lots of buildings have been built
 in the city. Such as Hall of residence, new shopping Possible spelling mistake. ‘centre’ is British English.center
centre
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:and many more
and others
 we can This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :witness
see
 on the map.

The most interesting This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :alteradjust
change
 is converting train station into police station it is Did you mean “the most”?the most
most
 visible thing. And new train station has been built
 near university. It is really
 comfortable to students This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:and many more
and others
. Don’t put a space before the full stop..
.
 It is really
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :beneficialproduct
good
 transforming. And other part of the city there were lots of trees and This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :nowadays
now
 trees have been This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :minimize
cut
 down, new shopping Possible spelling mistake. ‘centre’ is British English.center
centre
 has been built
. We can This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :witness
see
 cinema and bars, clubs by the sea. This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:on the contrary
But
 there weren’t any kind of places This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:previouslyprior to
before
. Another most interesting comfort is the road. The road has been pedestrianized
 for travelers. 