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The graph below provides information on figures for urban populations in different world regions.

The graph below provides information on figures for urban populations in different world regions. Xg9A

The presented illustration of the bar chart reveals data about world population between 2015 and 2040. Overall, it can be clearly that, the world population will have grown significantly in developing regions. However, in developed regions will have fluctuated. It is conspicuous that, the largest millions of people will have been living in developing regions from 2015 to 2040. Also, the rate of people will have grown significantly and will have reached 4. 000 in 2040. Even so, in developed countries, the data will be the same, the rate of people in developed regions will have accounted for 1. 200 in 2040. The data about developing countries

The presented illustration of the bar chart reveals data about world population between 2015 and 2040.

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