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The tables below provide information about the consumption and production of potatoes in five parts of the world in 2006.

The tables below provide information about the consumption and production of potatoes in five parts of the world in 2006. ODkG
The tabular chart gives the utilisation and proffering of potatoes in five region of the world in 2006. From the overall analysis, it is inferred that the minimum potatoes was taken by Europe, whereas maximum potatoes was produced between Europe and Asia. It can be clearly seen from the illustration, twenty three. six potatoes were consumed by per person in South and Central America, however Africa was one of the nation, which accounted the least amount of taking potatoes, as 14. 1. Although the expenditure of potatoes in North America was 57. 9 kilo gram per person, while Europe was more than North America, being 96. 1 kilo gram. Rest of the country, as Asia, the ingestion of potatoes by per person was 25. 8 kilo gram. Turning towards the second chart, there was a difference of producing potatoes was merely 1 quantity between South and Central America with the quantity of 15. 6 and 16. 4 millions, respectively. With the quantity of 24. 7 millions potatoes had generated by North America. In Asia, the highest potatoes were occasioned and it was 131. 2 millions and this trend was followed by Europe which was 126. 3 millions.
The tabular chart gives the
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utilisation
and proffering of
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potatoes
in five
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region
of the world in 2006. From the
overall
analysis, it
is inferred
that the minimum
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potatoes
was taken
by Europe, whereas maximum
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potatoes
was produced
between Europe and Asia. It can be
clearly
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seen
from the illustration,
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twenty three
.
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six
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potatoes
were consumed
by per person in South and Central America,
however
Africa was one of the nation, which accounted the least amount of taking
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potatoes
, as 14. 1.
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Although
the expenditure of
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potatoes
in North America was 57. 9 kilo
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gram
per person, while Europe was more than North America, being 96. 1 kilo gram. Rest of the country, as Asia, the ingestion of
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potatoes
by per person was 25. 8 kilo
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gram
. Turning towards the second chart, there was a difference of producing
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potatoes
was
merely
1 quantity between South and Central America with the quantity of 15. 6 and 16. 4
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millions
,
respectively
. With the quantity of 24. 7
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millions
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potatoes
had generated by North America. In Asia, the highest
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potatoes
were occasioned
and it was 131. 2
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millions
and this trend
was followed
by Europe which was 126. 3
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millions
.
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IELTS academic The tables below provide information about the consumption and production of potatoes in five parts of the world in 2006.

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