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The graph below shows the percentage of dependents in 2000 and the predicted figures in 2050 in five countries, and also gives the world average. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main figures and make comparisons where relevant

The graph below shows the percentage of dependents in 2000 and the predicted figures in 2050 in five countries, and also gives the world average. Y7Nd
The given column graph illustrates the percentage of dependents (children below 15 or adults above 65) in five countries in 2000 and also gives projections for 2050. It also depicts the world average in the given two years. In 2000, India had the maximum percentage of dependents (38%), with Japan, Indonesia and China following closely behind with around 34% of dependents. Korea had the least percentage of reliant people (22%). The overall world population of children below 15 and adults over 65 was 25%. Looking into the future, an increase in the population of dependents is predicted for Indonesia, Korea, China and Japan. In contrast, in India the needy population is thought to fall from 38% to 32%. In Korea the population is expected to double by 2050, from 22% to 44%. Approximately 15% rise in such population is predicted for Japan, whereas China is thought to show the least increase (2%). The world average of the dependents is expected to go up from about 25% to nearly 42%. Overall, the percentage of dependents is expected to decrease in India whereas in other four countries it is projected to increase.
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column graph illustrates the percentage of dependents (children below 15 or

adults above 65) in five countries in 2000 and
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gives projections for 2050. It
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the world average in the
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two years.

In 2000, India had the maximum percentage of dependents (38%), with Japan, Indonesia and

China following
closely
behind with around 34% of dependents. Korea had the least

percentage of reliant
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people
(22%). The
overall
world
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population
of children below 15 and

adults over 65 was 25%.

Looking into the future, an increase in the
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population
of dependents
is predicted
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Indonesia, Korea, China and Japan.
In contrast
, in India the needy
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is
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fall from 38% to 32%. In Korea the
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is
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expected
to double by 2050, from 22% to

44%. Approximately 15% rise in such
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is predicted
for Japan, whereas China is

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the least increase (2%). The world average of the dependents is
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go up from about 25% to
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to decrease in India whereas in other four

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IELTS academic The graph below shows the percentage of dependents in 2000 and the predicted figures in 2050 in five countries, and also gives the world average.

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