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The graph below indicates the proportion of graduates from the University of Brighton in 2019 academic year applying various employment sectors.

The graph below indicates the proportion of graduates from the University of Brighton in 2019 academic year applying various employment sectors. MmX1e

The graph below indicates the proportion of graduates from the University of Brighton in 2019 academic year applying various employment sectors. As it is shown in the chart the service industries speciality is peaked among the other fields with 33 percent while sport is placed in the last stage with the least proportion. Students occupied in manufacturing industry system contains 16. 3% of employees with a slight change in education system which owns the second position. After that it is clearly seen that the sphere of politics and government supported 12. 1% percent graduates with occupancy. With a small amount of difference, transportation and warehousing corporation and science and technology possesses the following stage. 5. 6% proportion of employees applied a job in civil service field. Charity and other sections remained as the lowest sectors of employment. To sum up, a great number of graduates of Brighton University in 2019 occupied in major fields including the largest quantity of service industries and sport stated as the least one.

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 amount of difference, transportation and warehousing corporation and science and technology possesses the following stage. 5. 6% proportion of employees applied a job in civil service field. Charity and other sections remained as the lowest sectors of employment. To sum up, a great number of graduates of Brighton University in 2019 occupied in major fields including the largest quantity of service industries and sport stated as the least one. 