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The diagram shows how to change a flat tire on a road.

The diagram shows how to change a flat tire on a road. bb7JP
The given diagram illustrates numerous detailed steps showing how to change a flat tire. The process, which is divided into seven separate stages. First of all, the beginning phase starts The initial stage involves ensuring confirming safety, in which cars should be driven to a safe location to avoid unwanted accidents. It is also important to turn on the hazard lights and apply the parking brake in this step. However, in case of still feeling insecure, it is encouraged to call for emergency help. Following that, all of the lug nuts are accurately loosened by using the lug wrench at an equal rate, which is about a quarter to half-turn each. The caution for this stage is that the lug nuts mustn't be removed completely yet. Turning to the third stage, the car is lifted up with a jack or any available equipment until it is at least six inches off the ground. During and after raising the car, the drivers must not leave any part of their bodies under the vehicle in order to prevent serious problems that may occur. Once finished, the lug nuts then now are removed and placed aside safely. With the help of the axle, the tire is removed carefully by grasping it with both hands and pulling straight perpendicularly to the car body toward eye vision, the old tire then should be set aside into a position that will not allow it to roll away. According to the pictures, the fifth phase involves attaching the new tire so that it would not be detached from the axle will not be placed backward. Each lug nut is screwed back onto the tire manually and be is tightened at the referred unscrewing rate. Before tightening them again with the lug wrench, the drivers should pay attention when lowering the vehicle back to the ground and removing the jack placed under it. At the last stage, the air pressure inside the spare tire should be checked to make sure if it is road-ready. As a spare tire is only a temporary solution, it is extremely dangerous to drive more than 50 mph0 and more than 70 miles before the drivers reach a mechanic.
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given
diagram illustrates numerous detailed steps showing how to

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change
a flat
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tire
. The process, which
is divided
into seven separate stages.

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First of all
, the beginning phase
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starts
The initial
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stage
involves ensuring confirming safety, in which
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cars
should
be driven
to a safe location to avoid unwanted accidents. It is
also
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important
to turn on the hazard lights and apply the parking brake in this step.
However
, in case of
still
feeling insecure, it
is encouraged
to call for emergency
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help
. Following that,
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all of the
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lug
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nuts
are
accurately
loosened by using the
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lug
wrench at an equal rate, which is about a quarter to half-turn each. The caution for this
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stage
is that the
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lug
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nuts
mustn't
be removed
completely
yet
.

Turning to the third
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stage
, the
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car
is
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lifted up
with a jack or any available

equipment until it is at least six inches off the ground. During and after

raising the
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car
, the drivers
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must
not
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leave
any part of their bodies under the

vehicle in order to
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prevent
serious problems that may occur. Once finished,

the
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lug
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nuts
then
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now
are removed
and placed aside
safely
. With the
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help
of the

axle, the
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tire
is removed
carefully
by grasping it with both hands and pulling

straight
perpendicularly
to the
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car
body toward eye vision, the
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old
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tire
then should
be set
aside into a position that will not
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allow
it to roll away.

According to the pictures, the fifth phase involves attaching the new tire

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so
that it would not
be detached
from the axle will not
be placed
backward. Each
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lug
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nut
is screwed
back onto the
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tire
manually
and be
is tightened
at the referred unscrewing rate.
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Before
tightening them again with the
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lug
wrench, the drivers should pay attention when lowering the vehicle back to the ground and removing the jack placed under it. At the last
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stage
, the air pressure inside the spare
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tire
should be
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checked
to
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make
sure if it is road-ready. As a spare
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tire
is
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only
a temporary solution, it is
extremely
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dangerous
to drive more than 50 mph0 and more than
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70 miles
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before
the drivers reach a mechanic.
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