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The line graph gives information about the amount of paper, wood pulp and sawn-wood in the UK over a 20-year period, from 1980 to 2000.

The line graph gives information about the amount of paper, wood pulp and sawn-wood in the UK over a 20-year period, from 1980 to 2000. bb7nP
The line graph gives information about the amount of paper, wood pulp and sawn-wood in the UK over a 20-year period, from 1980 to 2000. Overall, it can be seen from the chart that the amount of paper and packing was the highest. Moreover, while the production of sawn-wood decreased significantly, the figure for wood pulp remained constant. In the first year of the given period, the number of paper and packaging accounted for nearly 250 million tones. In the subsequent years, there was a dramatic growth in the production of paper and packaging and it reached a peak at 350 million tones. In 1980, the number of sawn-wood and wood pulp was 200 and nearly 170 million tones respectively. There was a decline in the amount of sawn-wood and it fell to its lowest number in 2000. In addiction, the production of wood-pulp nearly stayed the same over the given time.
The line graph gives information about the amount of paper, wood pulp and sawn-wood in the UK over a 20-year period, from 1980 to 2000.

Overall
, it can be
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
seen
from the chart that the amount of paper and packing was the highest.
Moreover
, while the production of sawn-wood decreased
significantly
, the figure for wood pulp remained constant.

In the
first
year of the
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
given
period, the number of paper and packaging accounted for
nearly
250 million tones. In the subsequent years, there was a dramatic growth in the production of paper and packaging and it reached a peak at 350 million tones.

Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Consider rewording the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
In
1980, the number of sawn-wood and wood pulp was 200 and
nearly
170 million tones
respectively
. There was a decline in the amount of sawn-wood and it fell to its lowest number in 2000. In addiction, the production of wood-pulp
nearly
stayed the same over the
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
given
time.
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IELTS academic The line graph gives information about the amount of paper, wood pulp and sawn-wood in the UK over a 20-year period, from 1980 to 2000.

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