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The line graph gives information about the consumption of renewable energy

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The line graph gives information about the consumption of renewable energy accounting the total energy between 1971 and 2011 in six different countries, namely: Finland, Denmark, France, Germany, United States and United Kingdom. Overall, it can be seen from the chart that the highest amount of renewable energy was used in Finland; whereas, the number of renewable energy consumed in the United Kingdom made up the lowest amount. In 1971, the percentage of renewable energy used in Finland, Denmark and the United States was 25%, 15% and nearly 5% respectively. There had been fluctuations in the number of renewable energy used in these three countries in the first half of the given period. However, in the last half, they became more stable and they both reached their peak in the last year of the given period. The percentage of renewable energy consumed in France, Germany and United Kingdom in 1971 was around 10%, nearly 5% and a little more than 0% respectively. There was a light decline in the amount of renewable energy consumed in the first half of the given time. However, they both had dramatic increases in the following part of the period and they also reached their peak in 2011 as Finland, Denmark and the United States did.
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accounting the total
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energy
between 1971 and 2011 in six
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different
countries,
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States and
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Kingdom.

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, it can be
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seen
from the chart that the highest amount of
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renewable
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energy
was
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used
in Finland; whereas, the number of
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renewable
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energy
consumed in the
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United
Kingdom made up the lowest amount.

In 1971, the percentage of
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renewable
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energy
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used
in Finland, Denmark and the
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United
States was 25%, 15% and
nearly
5%
respectively
. There had been fluctuations in the number of
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renewable
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energy
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used
in these three countries in the
first
half of the
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given
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, in the last half, they became more
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stable and
they both reached their peak in the last year of the
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given
period.

The percentage of
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consumed in France, Germany and
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United
Kingdom in 1971 was around 10%,
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5% and a
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more than 0%
respectively
. There was a light decline in the amount of
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renewable
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energy
consumed in the
first
half of the
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given
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, they both had dramatic increases in the following part of the
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period and
they
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reached their peak in 2011 as Finland, Denmark and the
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States did.
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