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The line graph presents the data on vehicles theft cases in Great Britain, Sweden, France, and Canada from 1990 to 1999.

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The line graph presents the data on vehicles theft cases in Great Britain, Sweden, France, and Canada from 1990 to 1999. Overall, it can be seen that the number of stolen cars are far higher in the UK than other countries. And the Sweden showed increased trend of vehicles theft over the given period. According to the diagram, about 17 per thousand vehicles were stolen in Britain in 1990. Although, the numbers were fluctuated over the next years to finish at just under the starting number, it still remained higher than all three countries in all period. France and Canada nearly has the same trend by approximately 6 and 7 vehicle thefts in 1990, and then the number slightly decreased over the next three years to level down at 5 vehicles per 1000 in 1999. By contract, Sweden was the only country that showed the increased trend of cars stolen. Started about 6 cars stolen in 1990, the rate increased significantly to finish at nearly 15 vehicles stolen per 1000 in 1999.
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theft cases in Great Britain, Sweden, France, and Canada from 1990 to 1999.
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cars are far higher in the UK than other countries. And the Sweden
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increased trend of
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theft over the
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were
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in Britain in 1990. Although, the
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thefts in 1990, and then the
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three years to level down at 5
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per 1000 in 1999. By contract, Sweden was the
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the increased trend of cars
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in 1990, the rate increased
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IELTS academic The line graph presents the data on vehicles theft cases in Great Britain, Sweden, France, and Canada from 1990 to 1999.

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