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the table shows some information about types of crime in urban and rural areas of the Helby region of the UK

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The table provides data about crime involving traffic offences in urban and rural areas of the Helby region of the United Kingdom in 2015. Overall, there were fewer traffic offences in Helby in rural areas than urban areas. According to the numbers, illegal parking is the most popular in both sectors. In urban areas, driving without a licences represented over a third of all when it was exactly one third in rural areas. Zero point two percent crime of urban was speeding and there was not any in rural areas. This type was the least. Dangerous driving were just under a fifth in urban and falling to over sixteenth percent in rural. Almost crime in rural involved illegal parking with exactly a half of all. It was just lower a little in urban areas. Comparing the Helby percentages with internal averages, it is clear that Helby patterns are typical of illegal parking while speeding is approximately none.
The table provides data about crime involving traffic
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region of the United Kingdom in 2015.
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. According to the numbers, illegal parking is the most popular in both sectors. In
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, driving without a
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represented over a third of all when it was exactly one third in
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was speeding and there was not any in
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and falling to over sixteenth percent in
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involved illegal parking with exactly a half of all. It was
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percentages with internal averages, it is
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patterns are typical of illegal parking while speeding is approximately none.
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