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The graph below gives the information about dubai gold sales in 2002 summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant

The graph below gives the information about dubai gold sales in 2002 YLLlV
The diagram illustrates how gold sales in Dubai changed from January to December 2002. Overall, the figure fluctuated widely before returning to the original level at the end of the year. Besides, gold sales were at their highest in March, while the weakest figures could be observed in July and September. In the first month of 2002, the figure stood at 200 million dirhams and rose slightly to reach about 225 million in February. This was followed by another increase, although much steeper, in march when sales hit 350 million. However, this upward trend was suddenly broken and sales declined dramatically over the next 4 months to reach a little over 100 million in July. August sales saw a significant rise back to January level as it was in July. There was a small increase of about 100 million dirhams in October, after which the figure levelled off and remained relatively unchanged over the last two months of 2002.
The diagram illustrates how gold
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in Dubai
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from January to December 2002.
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, the
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fluctuated
widely
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before
returning to the original level at the
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end
of the year.
Besides
, gold
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sales
were at their highest in March, while the weakest
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figures
could
be observed
in July and September. In the
first
month of 2002, the
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stood at 200
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million
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dirhams
and rose
slightly
to reach about 225
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million
in February. This
was followed
by another increase, although much steeper, in
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march
when
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hit 350
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million
.
However
, this upward trend was
suddenly
broken and
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sales
declined
dramatically
over the
next
4 months to reach a
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little
over 100
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million
in July. August
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saw
a significant rise back to January level as it was in July. There was a
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small
increase of about 100
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dirhams
in October, after which the
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levelled off and remained
relatively
unchanged over the last two months of 2002.

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