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The bar chart below shows the results of a poll of theatre-goers on what disturbs them during performances at the theater.

The bar chart below shows the results of a poll of theatre-goers on what disturbs them during performances at the theater. e55NK
The bar chart depicts a several differ issue who irritants for theatergoers on what disturbs them during performances. Numbers are measured in percentage. Overall, sweet papers, coughing and arriving late these physical activities were higher percentage of a poll than others, while the survey of a vote armrest hugging was the least percentage compared to the others. As we can be seen clearly, sweet papers were the highest result of poll (100%), while coughing and arriving late were comparatively same result it less than 80%. Moreover, whispering is indicated the outcomes of vote is 60% when compared to the mobile phones were considerably less than 60%. Farther, beeps and sneezing were well under 50%(40%, 45%). On the other hand, during the conclusion of poll about tall people and snoring were exactly same 30%, yet flash photography and enormous hairdos were merely under 30% and armrest hogging was the lowest percentage of a poll than all others reactions quite 20%.
The bar chart depicts a several differ issue who irritants for theatergoers on what disturbs them during performances. Numbers
are measured
in percentage.

Overall
, sweet papers, coughing and arriving late these physical activities were higher percentage of a
poll
than others, while the survey of a vote armrest hugging was the least percentage compared to the others.

As we can be
seen
clearly
, sweet papers were the highest result of
poll
(100%), while coughing and arriving late were
comparatively
same result it less than 80%.
Moreover
, whispering
is indicated
the outcomes of vote is 60% when compared to the mobile phones were
considerably
less than 60%. Farther, beeps and sneezing were well under 50%(40%, 45%).

On the other hand
, during the conclusion of
poll
about tall
people
and snoring were exactly same 30%,
yet
flash photography and enormous hairdos were
merely
under 30% and armrest hogging was the lowest percentage of a
poll
than all others reactions quite 20%.
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IELTS academic The bar chart below shows the results of a poll of theatre-goers on what disturbs them during performances at the theater.

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4 paragraphs
159 words
7.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0
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Lexical Resource: 6.5
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