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The chart shows the unemployment situation in Australia in the year 2012. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The chart shows the unemployment situation in Australia in the year 2012. 855wx

The present chart provides an analysis of how many people are facing unemployment in Australia. This graph depicts the information reported from rural and urban areas during the year 2012. Overall, urban areas which were facing the least unemployment in the first quarter of 2012 had a significant leap over the second quarter. Whereas, In case of rural, which had the highest figure of 70% during the starting year was dropped to around 40% in mid-May. Meanwhile, urban areas faced a drastic fell between May and September, later picked up a steady growth of 20% until the end of the last few months of 2012 and hit with a slight fall and kept a growing tendency during the last quarter. In contrast, Coming to rural areas, which has seen a dramatic decline in unemployment faced in between the period of Jan to Aug, they maintained a standard fluctuation until the end of the year with a slight difference in the midst.

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 are facing unemployment in Australia. This graph depicts the information reported from rural and urban You use this word too often, consider replacing it withfieldoperationrangespace
areas
 during the year 2012.

Overall
, urban You use this word too often, consider replacing it withfieldoperationrangespace
areas
 which were facing the least unemployment in the first
 quarter of 2012 had a significant leap over the second quarter. Whereas, In case of rural, which had the highest figure of 70% during the starting year was dropped
 to around 40% in mid-May. Meanwhile, urban You use this word too often, consider replacing it withfieldoperationrangespace
areas
 faced a drastic fell between May and September, later picked up a steady growth of 20% until the This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :expiration
end
 of the last few months of 2012 and hit with a slight fall and This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :retained
kept
 a growing tendency during the last quarter. In contrast
, Coming to rural You use this word too often, consider replacing it withfieldoperationrangespace
areas
, which has This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :witnessed
seen
 a dramatic decline in unemployment faced in between the period of Jan to Aug, they maintained a standard fluctuation until the This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :expiration
end
 of the year with a slight difference in the midst. 