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The graph below gives information from a 2008 report about consumption of energy in the USA since 1980 with projections until 2030. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The graph below gives information from a 2008 report about consumption of energy in the USA since 1980 with projections until 2030. MMWjk
The graph illustrates the extracted information from a report of the year 2008 about energy consumption in the USA from 1980 until 2030. overall, it is observed that there is an increasing pattern overtime in all the fuel categories. In the year 1980, hydropower, solar / wind, nuclear almost had similar units of consumption, by following an erratic pattern further it is anticipated that hydropower will have steady fall, whereas solar and nuclear will be slight increased by 5% and 7% respectively in the year 2030. Turning to, coal it will face an upward trend and will be rocketed by 30 units in 2030. It is also noted that natural gas consumption will dip and rise in the consequent years but will be steady at 25 units by 2030. However, petrol and oil on the initial basis faced fluctuation but the highest consumed fuel in the USA will be petrol and oil by almost 47 units in the year 2030.
The graph illustrates the extracted information from a report of the
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2008 about energy consumption in the USA from 1980 until 2030.
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overall
, it
is observed
that there is an increasing pattern overtime in all the fuel categories. In the
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year
1980, hydropower, solar / wind, nuclear almost had similar
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units
of consumption, by following an erratic pattern
further
it
is anticipated
that hydropower will have steady fall, whereas solar and nuclear will be slight increased by 5% and 7%
respectively
in the
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year
2030. Turning to, coal it will face an upward trend and will
be rocketed
by 30
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units
in 2030. It is
also
noted that natural gas consumption will dip and rise in the consequent years
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but
will be steady at 25
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units
by 2030.
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, petrol and oil on the initial basis faced fluctuation
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the highest consumed fuel in the USA will be petrol and oil by almost 47
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2030.
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IELTS academic The graph below gives information from a 2008 report about consumption of energy in the USA since 1980 with projections until 2030.

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