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The chart below shows what UK graduate and post graduate students who did not go into full-time work did after leaving college in 2008. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparison where relevant

The chart below shows what UK graduate and post graduate students who did not go into full-time work did after leaving college in 2008. VBKRD
The bar chart illustrate the UK graduate and post graduate students of 2008. Who after leaving the college did not go into full-time work. In an overall, it is noticeable that there is a big difference of destination (that is part-time work, voluntary work, Further study and unemployment) in number of students between UK graduate and post graduate. In which the highest difference is seen in further study and lowest is in voluntary work. UK graduate hit the peak in further study leading about 29, 665 students whereas UK post graduate have lower students that is about 2, 725. In part-time work UK graduate had 17, 735 students and post graduate had about 2, 535 students. Lastly unemployment have 16, 235 and 1, 625 students in both Uk graduate and post graduate respectively. Moving further the voluntary work done by both the UK graduate and post graduate is slightly lower in compare with all other destination which is 3, 500 for UK graduate and 345 for UK post graduate.
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study and unemployment) in number of
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between UK
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study and lowest is in voluntary work.

UK
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hit the peak in
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study leading about 29, 665
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whereas UK
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have lower
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about 2, 725. In part-time
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had 17, 735
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had about 2, 535
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the voluntary
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done by both the UK
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IELTS academic The chart below shows what UK graduate and post graduate students who did not go into full-time work did after leaving college in 2008.

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6.5
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