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The three pie charts indicate the proportion of US music album sales divided into 5 genres (Jazz, Country, R&B, Rock, and Alternative) in the years 2008, 2009, and 2010.

The three pie charts indicate the proportion of US music album sales divided into 5 genres (Jazz, Country, R&B, Rock, and Alternative) in the years 2008, 2009, and 2010. LbGp8

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