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The given picture illustrates the recent changes of the town in Kimsville from 2002 until now.

The given picture illustrates the recent changes of the town in Kimsville from 2002 until now. PRM9j

The given picture illustrates the recent changes of the town in Kimsville from 2002 until now. Look at the map, it is obvious that the town experienced a number of changes. Overall, the expansion of the town was accompanied by the introduction of some new infrastructure. In 2002, the shopping center was in among a bunch of trees located in the north of the shopping center. However, nowadays, a building is built on the northwest side of the shopping center instead of trees, and the woodland on the opposite side has continued to locate. In 2002, a factory was built on the east side of the city center and an empty land was on the west side, but everything is changed in the present day, a software company is built on the west side instead of the factory to reduce the carbon emission and on the opposite side a train station is built. In 2002, a cinema was built on the south side of the city center with numerous trees was surrounded. Nevertheless, in the modern area, a pub is built instead of the old cinema and a soccer stadium is built on the southwest side of the pub. On the southwest side, a lot of trees are saved to preserve the freshness of the environment

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given
 picture illustrates the recent This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :altersadjusts
changes
 of the town in Possible spelling mistake found.KnoxvilleHinesvilleLiouvilleTitusvillePinevilleRitzville
Kimsville
 from 2002 until This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :nowadays
now
.

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changes
. Overall
, the expansion of the town was accompanied
 by the introduction of This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a number of
some
 new infrastructure.

In 2002, the shopping center was in among a bunch of You use this word too often, consider replacing it withsaplingshrubwoodforesttimberseedling
trees
 located in the north of the shopping center. However
, nowadays, a building is built
 on the northwest side of the shopping center instead
 of You use this word too often, consider replacing it withsaplingshrubwoodforesttimberseedling
trees
, and the woodland on the opposite side has continued to locate. In 2002, a factory was built
 on the east side of the city center and an empty land was on the west side, This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:on the contrary
but
 everything is This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :alteredadjusted
changed
 in the present day, a software This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :enterprisecorporation
company
is built
 on the west side instead
 of the factory to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :alleviate
reduce
 the carbon emission and on the opposite side a train station is built
.

In 2002, a cinema was built
 on the south side of the city center with numerous You use this word too often, consider replacing it withsaplingshrubwoodforesttimberseedling
trees
was surrounded
. Nevertheless
, in the modern area, a pub is built
instead
 of the This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:ancientagedmature
old
 cinema and a soccer stadium is built
 on the southwest side of the pub. On the southwest side, This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a plethora ofa number ofnumerous
a lot of
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trees
are saved
 to preserve the freshness of the Please add a punctuation mark at the end of paragraphenvironment.environment!environment?environment:environment,environment;
environment