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This graph illustrates how crime rates altered in Panama City during the period 2010-2019.

This graph illustrates how crime rates altered in Panama City during the period 2010-2019. JNlw
Overall, it can be seen immediately that the greatest change occurred in the number of burglaries, while incidents of theft remained low but steady. In 2010, it is clear that burglary was the most common crime, with approximately 3, 400 reported cases. The figure rose to around 3, 700 in 2011, but then there was a downward trend until 2015. At this point the figure stood at just over 1, 000 incidents. This rose slightly in 2016, then continued to fluctuate for the remaining period. In 2010, the number of cars being stolen stood at around 2, 800 and followed a similar trend to burglary until 2013. At this point the number rose, standing at around 2, 200 in 2014. There was a marginal decrease in the following year, but from then on, the trend was generally upwards.
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occurred in the number of burglaries, while incidents of theft remained low
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In 2010, it is
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that burglary was the most common crime, with approximately 3, 400 reported cases. The figure rose to around 3, 700 in 2011,
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then there was a downward trend until 2015. At this point the figure stood at
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over 1, 000 incidents. This rose
slightly
in 2016, then continued to fluctuate for the remaining period.

In 2010, the number of cars
being stolen
stood at around 2, 800 and followed a similar trend to burglary until 2013. At this point the number rose, standing at around 2, 200 in 2014. There was a marginal decrease in the following year,
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from then on, the trend was
generally
upwards.
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