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In the future, nobody will buy printed newspapers or books because they will be able to read everything they want online without paying. What extent do you agree or disagree with this statement. Online news is far more better than printed newspapers and books but they never stop people from buying newspapers and books.

In the future, nobody will buy printed newspapers or books because they will be able to read everything they want online without paying. What extent Online news is far more better than printed newspapers and books but they never stop people from buying newspapers and books. kJRN
The graph illustrates the number of visitors coming to a visit a specific Caribbean island from 2010 to 2017. Tourists have two staying options one is on cruise ships and another is staying on island. Overall, majority of people stayed on island until 2015. Then they preferred to stay in cruise ships. In 2011, same number of visitors stayed in both the staying options is same. Considering people staying in island, From 2010 we encountered with a plateau for one year and then it increased to a high of 1. 5 million in 2013. Again we see a period of stability till 2015. Then the graph fluctuated and settled to 1. 5 million in 2017. In view of tourists staying in cruise ships, the graph showed opposite behaviour to graph of island residing people. And finally, it stayed at 2 million in 2017. In sum, the number of the people visiting island is increased from 2010 to 2015, after that we see a slip back in 2016 and it reaches peak with 3. 5 millions in 2017.
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illustrates the number of visitors coming to a visit a specific Caribbean
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island
from 2010 to 2017. Tourists have two
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staying
options one is on cruise ships and another is
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on island.

Overall
,
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people
stayed on
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until 2015. Then they preferred to stay in cruise ships. In 2011, same number of visitors stayed in both the
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staying
options is same. Considering
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people
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in
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, From 2010 we encountered with a plateau for one year and then it increased to a high of 1. 5
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million
in 2013. Again we
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a period of stability till 2015. Then the
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fluctuated and settled to 1. 5
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million
in 2017. In view of tourists
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staying
in cruise ships, the
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. And
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in 2017.

In sum, the number of the
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visiting
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is increased
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a slip back in 2016 and it reaches peak with 3. 5
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IELTS academic In the future, nobody will buy printed newspapers or books because they will be able to read everything they want online without paying. What extent Online news is far more better than printed newspapers and books but they never stop people from buying newspapers and books.

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