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The tables below give information about sales of Fairtrade *- labelled coffee and bananas in 1999 and 2004 in five Europan countries. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The tables below give information about sales of Fairtrade *- labelled coffee and bananas in 1999 and 2004 in five Europan countries. ePeG
The data provides information about two products of sales, which are coffee, also banana, are in five European states between 1999, and 2004. Therefore, manufacturing is being done by local farmers. Overall, both of category are increased profits generally in 2004, the numbers did not remain every single column, and country. In 1999, the statistics are lower than other option, which is a year. According to the table, the governments have been separated with reference to the ranks. First of all, the United Kingdom was located at the top category of coffee, however Switzerland is the first state in terms of the category of banana. The UK has 1. 5 millions of euros in 1999, and 20 millions of euros in 2004, as Switzerland possesses 15 million-euro in 1999 and 47 million-euro in 2004. These are classifications of coffee and banana respectively. On the other hand, Denmark has shown the biggest instability, because the class, that the UK’s location was at the above, is appeared third column, but in the data of banana, the state has been remained at the bottom. Meanwhile, the other two countries took the over columns.
The data provides information about two products of sales, which are coffee,
also
banana, are in five European states between 1999, and 2004.
Therefore
, manufacturing is
being done
by local farmers.

Overall
, both of category
are increased
profits
generally
in 2004, the numbers did not remain every single column, and country. In 1999, the statistics are lower than other option, which is a year. According to the table, the
governments
have
been separated
with reference to the ranks.

First of all
, the United Kingdom
was located
at the top category of coffee,
however
Switzerland is the
first
state in terms of the category of banana. The UK has 1.
5 millions of
euros in 1999, and
20 millions of
euros in 2004, as Switzerland possesses 15 million-euro in 1999 and 47 million-euro in 2004. These are classifications of coffee and banana
respectively
.

On the other hand
, Denmark has shown the biggest instability,
because
the
class
, that the UK’s location was at the above,
is appeared
third column,
but
in the data of banana, the state has
been remained
at the bottom. Meanwhile, the other two countries took the over columns.
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IELTS academic The tables below give information about sales of Fairtrade *- labelled coffee and bananas in 1999 and 2004 in five Europan countries.

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