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The graph below gives information about the origin of passengers entering Mexico on International flights, 2005- 2010. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

The graph below gives information about the origin of passengers entering Mexico on International flights, 2005- 2010. joJeL

The bar chart compares the number of passengers using international flights going to Mexico in the period of six years from 2005 to 2010. Overall, there is a huge difference between the four countries, namely Canada, the USA, Europe, and South America. The USA has the most development and Canada is growing slowly each year. Meanwhile, Europe has an up and down percentage and until 2010, South America just appeared. As can be seen from the chart, there is an unusual increase in the number of entries in the USA. It expanded the most in 2007, almost reaching 7, 000, 000, but in 2009, it stopped at the lowest number. The same as the USA, Europe also has a rise and fall number, it was increasing in 2008 and decreasing the most in 2009. Contrary to the USA and South America, Canada did not have the highest number but it was growing gradually. As a result, in 2009 and 2010, Canada had surpassed Europe, but the distance between each year was not very high. Unlike those three countries, until 2010 South American appeared and had the smallest number.

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number
 of passengers using international flights going to Mexico in the period of six years from 2005 to 2010.

Overall
, there is a huge difference between the four countries, namely
 Canada, the USA, Europe, and South America. The USA has the most development and Canada is growing slowly
 each year. Meanwhile, Europe has an up and down percentage and until 2010, South America This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:merely
just
 appeared.

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 from the chart, there is an unusual increase in the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withsumtotalfigurestatistic
number
 of entries in the USA. It expanded the most in 2007, almost reaching 7, 000, 000, This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:on the contrary
but
 in 2009, it This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :terminateceaseddiscontinued
stopped
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number
. The same as the USA, Europe also
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, it was increasing in 2008 and decreasing the most in 2009.

Contrary to the USA and South America, Canada did not have the highest You use this word too often, consider replacing it withsumtotalfigurestatistic
number
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but
 it was growing gradually
. As a result
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but
 the distance between each year was not This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:extremelyimmenselysupremelysuperb
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number
. 