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The graph below gives information about how much people in the United States and the United Kingdom spend on fuel. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The graph below gives information about how much people in the United States and the United Kingdom spend on fuel. K6bR
The line graph illustrates how much people belonging to different strata of the society spend on fuel in the United Kingdom and the United States. Overall, the poorest spend the most on fuel in the US while the poorest spend the least on fuel in the UK. Inversely, the richest spend comparatively lesser on fuel when compared to the other economic classes in the society with the richest in the US spending lesser than the elites in the UK. In the US the poorest groups of the society spend 4% of their income on fuel, this rose to almost 5. 5% as we move up the economic ladder. Middle-income groups spend 3. 5% to 5% of their income on fuel needs. The richest section of the society spends only 3% to 4% of their income on combustible fuels. In the UK, the poorest spend between less than 1% to 2. 3% on fuel. The middle-income groups spend approximately between 2% to 3. 5% on fuel across different levels of earnings. The richest people spend about 3% of their income on fuel.
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in the United Kingdom and the United States.

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in the UK.
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when compared to the other economic classes in the
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in the US spending lesser than the elites in the UK.

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4% of their
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, this rose to almost 5. 5% as we
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on combustible fuels.

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between less than 1% to 2. 3% on
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. The middle-income groups
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approximately between 2% to 3. 5% on
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IELTS academic The graph below gives information about how much people in the United States and the United Kingdom spend on fuel.

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6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
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