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The chart shows the unemployment situation in Australia in the year 2012.

The chart shows the unemployment situation in Australia in the year 2012. YVEV
The given line graph provides information on the percentage of people unemployed in rural and urban areas of Australia in the year 2012. Overall it is evident from the chart that a higher percentage of people were unemployed in rural areas throughout the period than compared to the urban areas. The unemployment rate fluctuated considerably in both areas. It is noticeable that rural areas had the highest rate of unemployment in the first quarter, with a value of around 7. 5%, This number steadily declined to approximately 4. 5% at the ending of the second quarter. However, in the third quarter, the unemployment rate rose to 5. 5% then again fell down to 5% in the fourth quarter. Urban areas had the lowest percentage of people unemployed at marginally above 2%, This value experienced a two-fold increase to 4% at the ending of the second quarter. However, in the third quarter, the unemployment rate decreased reaching a value similar to the first quarter. The ratio of people unemployed increased to a rate around 4. 9% at the end of the fourth quarter.
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unemployed
in rural and urban
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areas
of Australia in the year 2012.

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people
were
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unemployed
in rural
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areas
throughout the period than compared to the urban
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areas
. The
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unemployment
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rate
fluctuated
considerably
in both areas.

It is noticeable that rural
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areas
had the highest
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rate
of
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unemployment
in the
first
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quarter
, with a value of around 7. 5%, This number
steadily
declined to approximately 4. 5% at the ending of the second
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quarter
.
However
, in the third
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quarter
, the
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unemployment
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rate
rose to 5. 5% then again fell down to 5% in the fourth quarter.

Urban
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areas
had the lowest percentage of
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people
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unemployed
at
marginally
above 2%, This value experienced a two-fold increase to 4% at the ending of the second
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quarter
.
However
, in the third
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quarter
, the
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unemployment
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rate
decreased reaching a value similar to the
first
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quarter
. The ratio of
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people
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unemployed
increased to a
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rate
around 4. 9% at the
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end
of the fourth
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IELTS academic The chart shows the unemployment situation in Australia in the year 2012.

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