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The graph below gives information about changes in the birth and death rates in New Zealand between 1901 and 2101

The graph below gives information about changes in the birth and death rates in New Zealand between 1901 and 2101 YL2QN
The graph illustrates the changes in the number of people born and the number of people dying in New Zealand between the years 1901 and 2101. The units are measured in billions. Overall, the number of death cases was less than the number of birth cases in the year 1901. The number of deaths is predicted to increase in the year 2101, surpassing the number of people that will be born in the year 2101. In the case of the birth rate, it was around 20 million in the year 1901, which was two times more than that of the number of people dying. The number of newborns reached the highest in the year 1961(around 65 million) which was triple the number of people dying in that year. After 2001, there is a steep decline in the number of newborns. In the case of death rates, initially, the number of death cases in 1901 was over 9 million. The number of death cases is said to increase at an exponential rate with the highest number of cases predicted in the year 2061(around 59 million). There is a decline in the number of people dying after the year 2061, but it is still 10 million higher than the number of people born.
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