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The graph shows Underground Station passenger numbers in London. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. You should write at least 150 words.

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The given graph illustrates the number of passengers taking subway station in london from 6 am to 10 pm. Overall, it can be seen that majority of people passes through the station at 8 O'clock and the least at around 6 am and 4 pm. To begin with, about 100 passengers take underground at early morning (6 am). It was twice with in an hour and it increased rapidly upto 400 passengers by 8 am. Furthermore, it declined gradually to 185 people approximately by 10 am. By midnoon, it rose to around 270 people. As the time reached 2 pm, the station reached 300 passengers and then hit off to 100 people by 4pm as same as that in the 6 am. Then it started to rise exponentially and reached around 400 passengers by 6 pm. By 8pm, it dropped to 120 people respectively and then it started to flactuate and was steady at 10 pm with nearly 150 passengers.
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given
graph illustrates the number of
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passengers
taking subway station in
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london
from 6 am to 10 pm.

Overall
, it can be
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seen
that majority of
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people
passes through the station at 8 O'clock and the least at around 6 am and 4 pm.

To
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begin
with, about 100
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passengers
take underground at early morning (6 am). It was twice with in an hour and it increased
rapidly
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upto
400
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passengers
by 8 am.
Furthermore
, it declined
gradually
to 185
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people
approximately by 10 am. By
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midnoon
, it rose to around 270
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people
.

As the time reached 2 pm, the station reached 300
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passengers
and then hit off to 100
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people
by 4pm as same as that in the 6 am. Then it
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started
to rise
exponentially
and reached around 400
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passengers
by 6 pm. By 8pm, it dropped to 120
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people
respectively
and then it
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started
to
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flactuate
and was steady at 10 pm with
nearly
150
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passengers
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IELTS academic The graph shows Underground Station passenger numbers in London.

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