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The chart below shows the percentage of household in owned and rented accommodation in England and Wales between 1918 and 2011.

The chart below shows the percentage of household in owned and rented accommodation in England and Wales between 1918 and 2011. GMwej
The given diagram is presenting the ratio of households in owned and rented accommodation in England and Wales in year 1918 and 2011. It is showing owned household accommodation and another rented household accommodation. A part from that there was two housing accommodation level which were low in year 1918 and both owned and rented was constant in 1971. The ratio of households which is in percentage is showing in left side and the years are in bottom. Owned accommodation of household is representing by dark black and other housing is representing with light black. In year 1918 to 1961 owned accommodation of household is leading and there was highest ratio of own household in 1918 and there was constant ratio in 1971. After this year rented household leading the accommodation until 2011 year.
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owned
and rented
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accommodation
in England and Wales in
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year
1918 and 2011.

It is showing
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owned
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household
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accommodation
and another rented
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household
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accommodation
. A part from that there was two housing
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accommodation
level which were low in
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year
1918 and both
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owned
and rented was constant in 1971.

The
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ratio
of
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households
which is in percentage is showing in
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left
side and the years are in bottom.
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Owned
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accommodation
of
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household
is representing by dark black and other housing is representing with light black.

In
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year
1918 to 1961
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owned
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accommodation
of
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household
is leading and there was
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highest
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of
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own
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household
in 1918 and there was constant
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ratio
in 1971. After this
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rented
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household
leading the
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accommodation
until 2011
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year
.
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IELTS academic The chart below shows the percentage of household in owned and rented accommodation in England and Wales between 1918 and 2011.

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