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The graph below gives information about changes in the birth and death rates in new Zealand between 1901 and 2101.

The graph below gives information about changes in the birth and death rates in new Zealand between 1901 and 2101. Mpoe

The line graph depicts the number of births and deaths in New Zealand from 1901 to 2021 and also give the prediction of these rates till 2101. Observing the details, the rate of birth followed upward trend till 1961 and then, this figure rose significantly by 30, 000 and decline remarkably in 1921. After that, there was a rapid growth observed in the rate of births in New Zealand and reached at almost 70, 000 in 1961. However, this ratio decline massively with fluctuations and stood at around 50, 000 in 1981. Then, it surged sharply by 60, 000 in the following two decades. It is predicted that, this ratio will remain unchanged in between 40, 000 and 50, 000 till 2101. Considering the death rate, it started from 10, 000 and increased gradually with fluctuations and reached at almost 30, 000 deaths in 2021. However, this mortality rate will surge enormously and account for almost 60, 000 but, then it will steady till the end of the period. Overall, the rate of birth and death followed upward tendency with the number of fluctuations till 2021, but then both rate will remain constant until the next 100 years.

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