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The chart below shows the number of trips made by children in one country in 1990 and 2010 to travel to and from school using different modes of transport. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The chart below shows the number of trips made by children in one country in 1990 and 2010 to travel to and from school using different modes of transport. koed
the graph illustrates the medium of transport utilized by children aged from 5 to 12 years by travelling up and down to school for the time frame 1990 to 2010. the number of trips are measured as per million per unit and there are 5 medium of transport chosen by children (walking, car, cycle, walking and by bus) Overall, we can examine as per the graph walking was the most favorable in the year 1990, as the years passed the children have gradually shifted to car as a means of transport and is the most preferred in the year 2010. During the year 1990, walking was the most popular medium accounting for by slightly above 12 million but did decrease by half by 2010. Around 7 million children have chosen bus has the second best choice to travel to school. There were a little less than 6 million children who did use two mediums of transport (walking and Bus) on a daily basis to school. On the contrary, children gradually reduced by accounting around 5. 5 million by bus and 3 million children through bus and combination of bus and walking in the year 2010. Cycling recorded slightly over 6 million and the third most utilized mode of transport in the year 1990 but was drastically reduced by 4 million in the year 2010. Car was initially the least opted mode of transport in 1990 by just slight above 4 million but had drastically increased to around 11 million in 2010.
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utilized by
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children
aged from 5 to 12 years by travelling up and down to school for the time frame 1990 to 2010.
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chosen by
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children
(walking, car, cycle, walking and by bus)

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year
1990, as the years passed the
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children
have
gradually
shifted to car as a means of
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transport
and is the most preferred in the
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year
2010.

During the
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1990, walking was the most popular
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medium
accounting for by
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above 12
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million
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did decrease by half by 2010. Around 7
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million
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have chosen bus has the second best choice to travel to school. There were a
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less than 6
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who did
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two
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(walking and Bus) on a daily basis to school.
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by bus and 3
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through bus and combination of bus and walking in the
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year
2010.

Cycling recorded
slightly
over 6
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million
and the third most utilized mode of
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transport
in the
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year
1990
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was
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million
in the
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2010. Car was
initially
the least opted mode of
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in 1990 by
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slight above 4
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million
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had
drastically
increased to around 11
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million
in 2010.
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IELTS academic The chart below shows the number of trips made by children in one country in 1990 and 2010 to travel to and from school using different modes of transport.

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