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The table below gives information about the underground railway systems in six cities. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. You should write at least 150 words. Writing task 1

The table below gives information about the underground railway systems in six cities. 9yaw
The given table provides the details of underground rail facility which covered, length of rail in km, annually passenger used in million and date initiated in six different towns. Overall, according to passenger, tokyo has recorded highest number and kyoto has recorded lowest number in one year. whereas, london has long rail route as compaired to others mostly kyoto has short length of railways route. Now, turn to the details Tokyo built underground railways system in the year of 1927 which has 155 km of route and 1927 million people traveled per year. Paris has second majority after tokyo about passenger which has 1191 million with 199 km route and constructed in 1900. london has the oldest underground railway system which was built in 1863 and also the majority of longest route as that of othersand 775 million pillgrimage has used annually. In 2001 los angeles was built underground rail facility which has newest system from others with route of 28 km and 50million of passengers has traveled. whereas, kyoto has smallest number in passenger( 45 million) and which was built in the year of 1981 with rail route has provide only 11 km.
The
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given
table provides the
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details
of
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underground
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rail
facility which covered, length of
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rail
in km,
annually
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passenger
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used
in
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million
and date initiated in six
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different
towns.

Overall
, according to
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passenger
,
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tokyo
has recorded
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highest
number and
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kyoto
has recorded
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lowest
number in one year.
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whereas
,
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london
has long
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rail
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route
as
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compaired
to others
mostly
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kyoto
has short length of railways route.

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Now
, turn to the
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details
Tokyo built
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underground
railways system in the year of 1927 which has 155 km of
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route
and 1927
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million
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people
traveled per year.

Paris has second majority after
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tokyo
about
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passenger
which has 1191
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million
with 199 km
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route
and constructed in 1900.
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london
has the oldest
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underground
railway system which
was built
in 1863 and
also
the majority of
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longest
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route
as that of
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othersand
775
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million
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pillgrimage
has
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used
annually
.

In 2001
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los angeles
was built
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underground
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rail
facility which has
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newest
system from others with
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route
of 28 km and
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50million
of
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passengers
has traveled.
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whereas
,
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kyoto
has
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smallest
number in passenger
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(
45
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million)
and which
was built
in the year of 1981 with
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rail
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route
has
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provide
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only
11 km.
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IELTS academic The table below gives information about the underground railway systems in six cities.

Academic
  American English
5 paragraphs
194 words
5.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
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    Include an introduction and conclusion
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    Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.0
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  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
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    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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