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The graph below contains information about global carbon dioxide emission s over fifteen years.

The graph below contains information about global carbon dioxide emission s over fifteen years. 2KLWX
The graph illustrates the global carbon dioxide emissions measured in million of tons, for the years 1990 to 2004, in two-yearly intervals. Overall, if is clear that carbon dioxide emissions increased over the time period. In 1990, the carbon dioxide emission was 6000 million. This increased sharply about 6300 million in 1992, and the dropped slightly over the next two years to approximately 6000 million in 1994. It increased significantly and reaches to 6500 million and it remains constant from 1996 to 1998. It rose sharply over next four years to about 7000 million in 2002. In 2004, it reached to a peak around 7500 million of tons.
The graph illustrates the global carbon dioxide emissions measured in
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million
of tons, for the years 1990 to 2004, in two-yearly intervals.
Overall
, if is
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clear
that carbon dioxide emissions increased over the time period.

In 1990, the carbon dioxide emission was 6000
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million
. This increased
sharply
about 6300
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million
in 1992, and the dropped
slightly
over the
next
two years to approximately 6000
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million
in 1994. It increased
significantly
and reaches to 6500
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million
and it remains constant from 1996 to 1998. It rose
sharply
over
next
four years to about 7000
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million
in 2002. In 2004, it reached to a peak around 7500
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million
of tons.
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