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The graph below compares changes in the birth rates of China and the USA between 1920 and 2000.

The graph below compares changes in the birth rates of China and the USA between 1920 and 2000. WWLe

The below graph compares the changes of birth rates in China and USA from 1920 to 2000. Overall, it is clear that, USA has the highest birth rate over the china, while the graph tends to fluctuate a little ups and downs but decreases eventually in the last years. In 1920, USA has 11 births in the country where after five years it grows to 15. Moreover, in 1945, there has been a major breakdown to the situation that only 5 births are noted in this year. Consequently, it increased the rates of birth in the next five years and has over 15 births in 1950. After this the graph tends to fall down eventually and settles at 7 births in the year 2000. In China, the birth rates are less than USA in 1920 containing 10 births only. But it rises to 15 in 1935 and soar down to 5 in the next five years. In 1950, the graph suddenly rises to 20 births that year then tends to decrease in the following years and settles at 2 births in the year 2000.

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