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The graph and table below show the average monthly temperatures and the average number of hours of sunshine per year in three major cities. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

The graph and table below show the average monthly temperatures and the average number of hours of sunshine per year in three major cities. 5D1D

The given graph illustrates the changes of temperature in each month during the year in 3 different cities including London, New York and Sydney. The average time of sunshine per year is presented in the table below with the unit of hour. Overall, it is noticeable that New York and London have the similar trend on the monthly temperatures while they have a large difference in annual hours. From the graph, it can be clearly seen that London and New York have a low temperature in the beginning of the year at about 5-10 degrees while Sydney begins with the high degree at approximately 26. However, the trend tends to reverse in March which make New York be the hottest city in July with 29 degrees, followed by London and Sydney with 23 and 17 degrees respectively. Since the middle of July, the temperature have altered to the initial level, as can be seen that New York and London tend to drop while Sydney tends to rise. Moving to the table, New York has the highest hour of sunshine per year at 2535. Interestingly, Sydney, which has a different temperatures trend, gets almost the same hour at 2473. London which takes 1180 hour of sunshine, ranks the least.

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