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The charts below show the results of a survey of adult education. The first chart shows the reasons why adults decide to study. The pie chart shows how people think the costs of adult education should be shared. Write a report for a university lecturer, describing the information shown below

The charts below show the results of a survey of adult education. The first chart shows the reasons why adults decide to study. The pie chart shows how people think the costs of adult education should be shared. Write a report for a university lecturer, describing the information shown below 6D1r
The outcome of an analysis of adult education is illustrated by these two figures above. Bar chart presents the causes of decisions which adults take. The second figure demonstrate how tuition expenses should be funded. It is apparent that most students are lured to study according to their love for the subjects and correspondingly, largest portion of study fee must be carried by individual as reported by participants of the survey. According to the data provided, 4 out of 10 adults are deeply indulged in their favorite subjects while 38% prefer to continue their education to enhance their qualifications. 22% of the participants assume that studying would support their present job. For those students who profess that study would help them in getting a promotion and that it is a pleasing activity, an equal result is gathered (20%). A meagre number of students, 12% feel that study would benefit them to get better job. However, the least motivating factor to study is to make new companions, only 9 percent Furthermore, participants believe that, individual should be bearer of %40 for his own education. Finally, 35% and one-fourth of the expense should be provided by employer and tax-payers respectively.
The outcome of an analysis of adult education
is illustrated
by these two figures above. Bar chart presents the causes of decisions which adults take. The second figure demonstrate how tuition expenses should
be funded
. It is apparent that most students
are lured
to
study
according to their
love
for the subjects and
correspondingly
,
largest
portion of
study
fee
must
be carried
by individual as reported by participants of the survey.

According to the data provided, 4 out of 10 adults are
deeply
indulged in their favorite subjects while 38% prefer to continue their education to enhance their qualifications. 22% of the participants assume that studying would support their present job. For those students who profess that
study
would
help
them in getting a promotion and that it is a pleasing activity, an equal result
is gathered
(20%). A
meagre
number of students, 12% feel that
study
would benefit them to
get
better job.
However
, the least motivating factor to
study
is to
make
new companions,
only
9 percent

Furthermore
, participants believe that, individual should be bearer of %40 for his
own
education.
Finally
, 35% and one-fourth of the expense should
be provided
by employer and tax-payers
respectively
.
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IELTS academic The charts below show the results of a survey of adult education. The first chart shows the reasons why adults decide to study. The pie chart shows how people think the costs of adult education should be shared. Write a report for a university lecturer, describing the information shown below

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