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The diagrams provide us information about how plants, animals and people interact to produce carbondioxide and oxygen.

The diagrams provide us information about how plants, animals and people interact to produce carbondioxide and oxygen. There are two main parts in this interaction, the first of which includes plants and the other includes animals and people. In the first interaction oxygen is produced through a process called photosynthesis. First, the light from the sun is absorbed by the leaves of the plant. Next, the water in the soil is taken up by the root of the plant. These two substances, the sunlight and the water in the soil, are mixed with the carbondioxide taken by the plant from the atmosphere. Finally, the plant converts them to oxygen. In the second interaction, the carbondioxide which is produced by animals and people through breathing is shown. Both animals and people inhale the oxygen in the air and exhale it as carbondioxide, and the carbondioxide produced is again used by plants in the photosynthesis process.
The diagrams provide us information about how
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people
interact to produce
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carbondioxide
and oxygen. There are two main parts in this interaction, the
first
of which includes
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plants
and the other includes
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and
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people
.

In the
first
interaction oxygen
is produced
through a process called photosynthesis.
First
, the light from the sun
is absorbed
by the
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leaves
of the
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plant
.
Next
, the water in the soil
is taken
up by the root of the
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plant
. These two substances, the sunlight and the water in the soil,
are mixed
with the
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carbondioxide
taken by the
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plant
from the atmosphere.
Finally
, the
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plant
converts them to oxygen.

In the second interaction, the
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carbondioxide
which
is produced
by
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animals
and
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people
through breathing
is shown
. Both
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animals
and
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people
inhale the oxygen in the air and exhale it as
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carbondioxide
, and the
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carbondioxide
produced is again
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used
by
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plants
in the photosynthesis process.

IELTS academic The diagrams provide us information about how plants, animals and people interact to produce carbondioxide and oxygen.

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