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The graph bellow shows the number of whales sighted from Springbay lighthouse.

The graph bellow shows the number of whales sighted from Springbay lighthouse. eAj6A
This line graph illustrates the quantity of whales sighted from the lighthouse on Springbay between 2009 and 2013. Overall, there was a significant increase in the number of whales in these five years. From 2009 to 2013 the number of whales observed increased almost three times from around 40 to 110. The peak of occurrences happened in 2011 where whales were seen more than 100 times, and the year with less visualizations was 2010, when only 40 times in that year a whale could be seen. After the peak in 2011 there was a slight decrease in the next year, going to around 90 times that a whale was seen and in 2013 this number increased again, going to 110 visualizations in that year. Compared to 2009, when we had no more than 42 sighted whales, 2013 was the greatest year to see a whale from the lighthouse in Springbay in between these five years.
This line graph illustrates the quantity of
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between 2009 and 2013.
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in these five years.

From 2009 to 2013 the number of
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observed increased almost three
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from around 40 to 110. The peak of occurrences happened in 2011 where
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were
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more than 100
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, and the
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with
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visualizations was 2010, when
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in that
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could be
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After the peak in 2011 there was a slight decrease in the
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, going to around 90
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and in 2013 this number increased again, going to 110 visualizations in that year.

Compared to 2009, when we had no more than 42 sighted
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, 2013 was the greatest
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in between these five years.

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