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The graph illustrates the proportion of various materials that being recycled throughout 1980 to 2010. Paper and cardboards was recycled the most in comparison to other ones. It showd 65% rate in 1982 and various deviations was recognized upto 1992. Afterward gradual drop in recycling rate went up to 70% in 2008. The percentage was at peak with 80% in 1992. Glass containers was less recycled, in 1980 fifty percent of a container were reprocessed. It fall down to 40 percent in 1988. But afterwards rose up and highest rate was noticed 60 percent in 2008. At a glance, plastics remain below 10% throughout the years. Surprisingly, it was near to 0% during 1992. In conclusion, society had step forward in refusing along the period of tine, data shows number of people moved towards this process.
The graph illustrates the proportion of various materials that
being recycled
throughout 1980 to 2010.

Paper and
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cardboards
was recycled
the most
in comparison
to other ones. It
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showd
65% rate in 1982 and various deviations
was recognized
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upto
1992. Afterward gradual drop in recycling rate went up to 70% in 2008. The percentage was at peak with 80% in 1992.

Glass containers was less recycled, in 1980 fifty percent of a container
were reprocessed
. It
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fall
down to 40 percent in 1988.
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But
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afterwards
rose up and highest rate
was noticed
60 percent in 2008.

At a glance, plastics remain below 10% throughout the years.
Surprisingly
, it was near to 0% during 1992.

In conclusion
, society had step forward in refusing along the period of tine, data
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shows
number of
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people
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moved
towards this process.
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IELTS academic Recycle percentage of material during different years

Academic
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