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The graph and table below shows the water consumption worldwide and water use in two different countries,Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relavent.

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The given graph illustrates the information about water consumption worldwide and the table shows us the water consumption ratio of Brazil and Congo. The graph shows that from the year 1900 to the 2000 the water consumption in agricultural sector has increased massively without any variation and has gone from 500 km3 to 3000 km3 in year 2000, Similarly, the usage of water in the industrial sector from year 1910 to the year 2000 has also increased from 0 km3 to 1200 km3 but the graph then shows that the least utilization of water was in the sector of domestic use and have not even touched the 1000 km 3 line from the year 1910 to 2000 worldwide. the table below depicts the water consumption in Brazil and Congo, The population of 176 million of Brazil has consumed 26, 500km2 and 359m3, while on the contrary 5. 2 million population of Congo have used 100km2 and 8m3.
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worldwide and the table
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ratio of Brazil and Congo. The graph
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that from the
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1900 to the 2000 the
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in agricultural sector has increased
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2000,
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, the usage of
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in the industrial sector from
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1910 to the
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2000 has
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increased from 0 km3 to 1200 km3
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the graph then
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that the least utilization of
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was in the sector of domestic
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and have not even touched the 1000 km 3 line from the
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1910 to 2000 worldwide.
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table below depicts the
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in Brazil and Congo, The population of 176 million of Brazil has consumed 26, 500km2 and 359m3, while
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5. 2 million population of Congo have
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100km2 and 8m3.
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IELTS academic The graph and table below shows the water consumption worldwide and water use in two different countries,

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