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The map below show the village in stokeford in 1930 and in 2010. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant

The map below show the village in stokeford in 1930 and in 2010. 8r35
the illustration reveals a village map in 1930 and and in 2010. Overall, it is shown that the design of the village remains same despite the long period of years. In 1930, at the southern part, there was a river stoke, post office which is similarly to 2010 then bridge at the northern side as in 2010 too. In the eastern part, there is a primary school. it is equally seen that in 1930, shops was present across a partway by the side of post office, farmland both on the southern and easthern areas. In addition, a garden and large house was at the southern zone. In 2010, new innovation was seen like farmland and shops has been removed then replaced with structural designs. At the easthern area, where garden was located, a building for retirement home has the place now. Also, the primary school enlarged with additional buildings. Farmland at the southern area constructed a roundabout with designs on the pathways.
the
illustration reveals a village map in 1930
and and
in 2010.
Overall
, it
is shown
that the design of the village remains same despite the long period of years. In 1930, at the southern part, there was a river stoke, post office which is
similarly
to 2010 then bridge at the northern side as in 2010 too. In the eastern part, there is a primary school.
it
is
equally
seen
that in 1930, shops was present across a partway by the side of post office, farmland both on the southern and
easthern
areas.
In addition
, a garden and large
house
was at the southern zone. In 2010, new innovation was
seen
like farmland and shops has
been removed
then replaced with structural designs. At the
easthern
area, where garden
was located
, a building for retirement home has the place
now
.
Also
, the primary school enlarged with additional buildings. Farmland at the southern area constructed a roundabout with designs on the pathways.
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IELTS academic The map below show the village in stokeford in 1930 and in 2010.

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162 words
6.0
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