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The graph and table below show the average monthly temperatures and the average number of hours of sunshine per year in three major cities. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

The graph and table below show the average monthly temperatures and the average number of hours of sunshine per year in three major cities. 15nQM
The graph and table examine the monthly temperature levels and the amount of sunshine's hours per year in three big cities. Overall, the temperature in Sydney does not drop significantly, while in New York and London is floating. According to the table, New York and Sydney have almost the same number of annual sunshine hours, which are more than in London. During the months from January to December the highest and lowest temperature in Sydney are 26 degrees and 16 degrees respectively. New York shows great diversity with 4 degrees in January and almost 30 in July. The temperature in London varies from almost 10 to almost 25 also in January and July. Sydney has a steady temperature in the months November-March with an average of 25. Annually, London has an average of 1180 hours of sunshine. New York and Sydney have a great amount of it with 2535 and 2473 respectively.
The graph and table examine the monthly
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levels and the amount of sunshine's hours per year in three
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, the
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in Sydney does not drop
significantly
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York and London is floating. According to the table,
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York and Sydney have
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the same number of annual sunshine hours, which are more than in London. During the months from January to December the highest and lowest
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in Sydney are 26 degrees and 16 degrees
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New
York
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great diversity with 4 degrees in January and
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30 in July. The
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in London varies from
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10 to
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25
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in January and July. Sydney has a steady
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in the months November-March with an average of 25.
Annually
, London has an average of 1180 hours of sunshine.
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York and Sydney have a great amount of it with 2535 and 2473
respectively
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IELTS academic The graph and table below show the average monthly temperatures and the average number of hours of sunshine per year in three major cities.

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