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"The chart below shows the value of one country’s exports in various categories during 2015 and 2016. The table shows the percentage change in each category of exports in 2016 compared with 2015. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.”

"The chart below shows the value of one country’s exports in various categories during 2015 and 2016. The table shows the percentage change in each category of exports in 2016 compared with 2015. xmDX1
The two figures presented highlight the export sums as well as the percental change in values of a specific country respectively during one full year, stemming from 2015 to 2016 in a multitude of sectors. Overall, it can be inferred that regarding the chart, earning in exportation ate in their majority equitable with a proclivity to increasing the amount of goods sent overseas. Additionally, the percentage change varies greatly in range. Concerning the stipends in exports, the industry with the most noticeable increase was the textiles with a starting point of around 25 billion in 2015, augmenting to a little over 30 billion in the time period studied. Conversely, the Gems and Jewellery category detracted on their exported items, having had a decrease of around 5 billion dollars from about 45 billion to just slightly over 40 in the following year. Turning our attention to the table, it can be stated that albeit there being a general rise in percentage values, as expected due to the aforementioned results, the luxury sector was the only one to experience a drop, having had a decline of 5. 18%. In contrast, the textile business witnessed a percental rise of 15. 4%.
The two figures presented highlight the export sums
as well
as the
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percental
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change
in values of a specific country
respectively
during one full year, stemming from 2015 to 2016 in a multitude of sectors.

Overall
, it can
be inferred
that regarding the chart, earning in exportation ate in their majority equitable with a proclivity to increasing the amount of
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goods
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sent
overseas.
Additionally
, the percentage
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change
varies
greatly
in range.

Concerning the stipends in exports, the industry with the most noticeable increase was the textiles with a starting point of around 25
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billion
in 2015, augmenting to a
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little
over 30
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billion
in the time period studied.
Conversely
, the Gems and
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Jewellery
category detracted on their exported items, having had a decrease of around 5
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billion
dollars from about 45
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billion
to
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just
slightly
over 40 in the following year.

Turning our attention to the table, it can
be stated
that albeit there being a general rise in percentage values, as
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expected
due to the aforementioned results, the luxury sector was the
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only
one to experience a drop, having had a decline of 5. 18%.
In contrast
, the textile business witnessed a
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percental
rise of 15. 4%.

IELTS academic "The chart below shows the value of one country’s exports in various categories during 2015 and 2016. The table shows the percentage change in each category of exports in 2016 compared with 2015.

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198 words
6.0
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