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The graph above shows data about the total number of three different species in the waters of Gomerz Strats

The graph above shows data about the total number of three different species in the waters of Gomerz Strats gxxOL
To bar chart gives information about the total number of seals, whales and dolphins in Gomerz Strats in 2006 2010 2014 and 2018. Overall, it's clear that the total amount of seals are higher than other species. Another noteworthy fact is that the quantity of dolphins increase while the rate for whales were stable. Looking at the graph in a more detailed way, beginning of the period the number of seals in Gomerz Strats two times higher compared to whales and dolphins and made up about 40 and 20 respectively. In the following years as a total number of seals faced dramatical decline whilst the rate for whales and dolphins grew to about 23. By the end of the period, the amount of seals and dolphins had reached their peak. Regards for wheels had not changed.
To bar chart gives information about the total number of
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,
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whales
and dolphins in
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Gomerz
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Strats
in 2006 2010 2014 and 2018.
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, it's
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clear
that the total amount of
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seals
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are
higher than other species. Another noteworthy fact is that the quantity of dolphins increase while the rate for
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whales
were stable. Looking at the graph in a more detailed way, beginning of the period the number of
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seals
in
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Gomerz
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Strats
two times higher compared to
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whales
and dolphins and made up about 40 and 20
respectively
. In the following years as a total number of
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seals
faced
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dramatical
decline whilst the rate for
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whales
and dolphins grew to about 23. By the
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end
of the period, the amount of
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seals
and dolphins had reached their peak. Regards for wheels had not
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changed
.
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IELTS academic The graph above shows data about the total number of three different species in the waters of Gomerz Strats

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