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The diagram shows the information of whether by Australian Bureau of Meteorology collection. Summarize the diagram.

The diagram shows the information of whether by Australian Bureau of Meteorology collection. Summarize the diagram. aVJAX
The diagram illustrates the collection of wether information by Australian bureau of meteorology and updated and provided accurate to the public to forecasting. As can be seen, the information of wether collected by satellites, radar and drifting buoys. There are mainly three stages for it. To embark with, satelite photos through information collected in satellite, while radar screens through gathered in radars and in the drifting buoys gathered. Before the forecasting information to the public it's analyzed in computer. There are myriad media used for forecasting information to the public. All knowledge gathered and analyzed in computer and then after it broadcasting to the world by the newspaper, television and telephone. Satelite photos forecasting through television channels while radar screens broadcasting through newspapers and telephone announcements used for drifting buoys. To conclude that, Australian Bureau of Meteorology collected the wether information broadcasting to the people.
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information
by Australian bureau of meteorology and updated and provided accurate to the public to
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forecasting
. As can be
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seen
, the
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information
of
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wether
collected by satellites,
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radar
and drifting buoys. There are
mainly
three stages for it. To embark with,
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satelite
photos
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through
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information
collected in satellite, while
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radar
screens
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through
gathered in
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radars
and in the drifting buoys gathered.
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Before
the
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forecasting
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information
to the public it's analyzed in computer. There are myriad media
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used
for
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forecasting
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information
to the public. All knowledge gathered and analyzed in computer and then after it broadcasting to the world by the newspaper, television and telephone.
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Satelite
photos
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forecasting
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through
television channels while
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radar
screens broadcasting
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through
newspapers and telephone announcements
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used
for drifting buoys.
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that, Australian Bureau of Meteorology collected the
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broadcasting to the
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people
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IELTS academic The diagram shows the information of whether by Australian Bureau of Meteorology collection. Summarize the diagram.

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