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The table below gives information on consumer spending on different items in five different countries in 2002.

The table below gives information on consumer spending on different items in five different countries in 2002. wjYY
Overall, in all countries people spend the majority of money on essential needs as food, drinks and tobacco, while the minority of it is paid for leisure or education. The largest proportion of money is spent on food and drinks approximately from 16-32% of total amount. Two countries, namely Ireland and Turkey demonstrate the highest contributions in the list of consumers spending money on products, also, illustrate relatively similar numbers in three countries. Consumers from these 5 countries pay for clothing less than 1/10 of their income, the largest proportion of money spent on clothes is depicted by Italy(9%) Studies and entertainment have only the lowest percentages of cash spent on them, about 2-4% from each country, the highest contribution is accounted by Turkey (4. 35%)
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on essential needs as food, drinks and tobacco, while the minority of it
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for leisure or education. The largest proportion of
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on food and drinks approximately from 16-32% of total amount. Two
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,
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Ireland and Turkey demonstrate the highest contributions in the list of consumers spending
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on products,
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pay for clothing less than 1/10 of their income, the largest proportion of
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spent on clothes
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by Italy(9%) Studies and entertainment have
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IELTS academic The table below gives information on consumer spending on different items in five different countries in 2002.

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