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The graft and table below show the average monthly temperature and the average number of hours of sunshine per year in three major cities

The graft and table below show the average monthly temperature and the average number of hours of sunshine per year in three major cities OY33

The line graph illustrates the average temperature per month between January to December, while the table represents the total hours of sunshine yearly for London, New York, and Sydney. Overall, it is noticeable that the majority temperature in Sydney is higher than other capital cities over the period of time. However, New York has the highest hours of sunshine in a year. Focusing on the line graph, New York and Sydney start with a similar temperature in January at around 8 degrees and 5 degrees, respectively. Moreover, conditions in New York and Sydney are opposite trend to each other, whereas they have a highest temperature in the middle of July. However, London start with the highest temperature and steady decreasing to the lowest temperature at approximately 16 degrees and constantly increasing after that month. Turning to the table, the data shows that New York has a highest annual hours of sunshine for 2, 535 hours, followed by Sydney at 2, 473 hours respectively. On the contrary, London has only 1, 180 hours of sunlight, which is the lowest among three major cities.

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