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The Pie Chart shows the Volume of Sales of Coca-cola and as well as value of shares of breezing product.

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The Pie Chart shows the Volume of Sales of Coca-cola and as well as value of shares of breezing product. Firstly, In the Year of 2000 The shares of Coca-Cola was consumed as 38% of share price and Compared to 1996 was only 32%. second side, the Case of this Product is repeatedly increased in term of 30. 4% in North America and only 5% less than in latin America in the manner of 25. 7%. Second side of Europe and Asia was Purchased the Item 20. 5% and 16. 4% respectively. All overall there is no more than 7% Purchased by Africa and Middle East.
The Pie Chart
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shows
the Volume of Sales of Coca-cola and
as well
as value of shares of breezing product.
Firstly
, In the Year of 2000 The shares of Coca-Cola
was consumed
as 38% of share price and Compared to 1996 was
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only
32%.
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second
side, the Case of this Product is
repeatedly
increased in term of 30. 4% in North America and
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only
5% less than in
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latin
America in the manner of 25. 7%. Second side of Europe and Asia was
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Purchased
the Item 20. 5% and 16. 4%
respectively
. All
overall
there is no more than 7%
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
Purchased
by Africa and Middle East.
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IELTS academic The Pie Chart shows the Volume of Sales of Coca-cola and as well as value of shares of breezing product.

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