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The map shows the development of the village of Ryemouth between 1995 and present.

The map shows the development of the village of Ryemouth between 1995 and present. rVQJ
The map illustrates the improvement of the Regional area of Ryemouth from 1995 to current period. Overall, the most striking feature of the map is that the areas of Farmland and Forest park are converted into the court of golf and tennis. A glance at the map, a small number of houses have been compares to earlier along with that a road has also been constructed near the housing facility. Moreover, the shop area has been converted in a restaurant. A hotel has been modernised along with a car park. A golf and tennis court can be observed in the present time which was the Farmland and Forest park in 1995. Considering the other factors, apartments are build on the place of fish market which is near the road. Additionally, Fishing ports in 1995, have completely demolished in the current period of time. However, no change can be observed in the cafe compares to the year 1995
The map illustrates the improvement of the Regional area of
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Ryemouth
from 1995 to
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current
period.

Overall
, the most striking feature of the map is that the areas of Farmland and Forest park
are converted
into the court of golf and tennis.

A glance at the map, a
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small
number of
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
houses
have been compares to earlier along with that a road has
also
been constructed
near the housing facility.
Moreover
, the shop area has
been converted
in a restaurant. A hotel has been
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modernised
along with a car park. A golf and tennis court can
be observed
in the present time which was the Farmland and Forest park in 1995.

Considering the other factors, apartments are build on the place of fish market which is near the road.
Additionally
, Fishing ports in 1995, have completely demolished in

the
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
current
period of time.
However
, no
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change
can
be observed
in the
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cafe
compares to the year 1995
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IELTS academic The map shows the development of the village of Ryemouth between 1995 and present.

Academic
  American English
4 paragraphs
156 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0
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