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The table below gives information about UK independent films. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The table below gives information about UK independent films. klRd
The table represents the data about the independent film released in the UK and Republic of Ireland in different genre in the year 2012. Overall, the highest number of releases with similar figure was recorded for the genre drama and documentary, while the percentage of revenue generated from the ticket sales of both is quite less. The lowest number of releases is recorded for biopic. However, the percentile of income from the ticket sale is maximum for comedy and horror followed by biopic as compared to other genres. There was exactly the same number of releases for drama and documentary that is 35, the figure for both remains similar for the percentage of all the releases which ranges to 23. 6. However, the percentage of income was quite less from the sales of ticket of both drama and documentary, that is 8. 5% for drama and 2. 9% for documentary. While, comedy was the second largest contributing in the number of releases having range 26. Apart from this, the revenue generated by the sales of the comedy genre ticketgenre ticket was maximized, accounting for 45. 4%. figure of releases of biopic, action, romance, crime and other genres of movies were less than 10, comprising of only 5. 1% money generation, but the exception was there in case of biopic movies which generates 9. 1% of profit. In terms of horror and thriller, the number of releases is marginally similar (14 and 13 respectively). But the wage generated from the thriller genre (1. 3%) was sharply less than that of horror movies (20. 2%).
The table represents the data about the independent film released in the UK and Republic of Ireland in
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ticket
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of both is quite
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is recorded
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is maximum for comedy and horror followed by biopic as compared to other genres.

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the exception was there in case of biopic movies which generates 9. 1% of profit.

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